So, please read some of my work and tell me whatcha think. My more recent works are better, but they still need help.


'Nother poemI followed my footsteps'Nother poem
For the first time in years I winced at mistakes And covered my ears
I wandered the forest Of my tangled mind To see that my wanderings Have all been so blind
I dont want to go on To see any more Ive already failed But still I explore
When sand became soil And water turned mud My inner turmoil Would rise in my blood
I see here the scars On the world in my head The storm cloud appears I find shelter instead
I watch the rain falling I watch mys


PoemTo the WriterPoem
Unjust! Unfair! Our suffering You treat us so cruelly, author Each character must pay in pain For your own muse; our terror
You laugh with pleasure as we fall Whether in love or grip of death You cry though happy when we bawl And our dear friends take their last breath
But now we rise against you! We will have our revenge You go against our nature And now your thoughts dead-end
Alas for writers block you say And sadly watch us fade; The horror that we will not comply Us whom your pen has m
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Rest In PeaceHeres the tomb of all thats not Here lie memories I forgot Rest in peace my dreams that died Loved ones gone I always criedRest In Peace
Here rest lies spoken well Truths not believed I tried to tell Here lie friends who passed away So much more for you Id say
The tomb is silent as a shadow All my terror lies below Everything that made me sad All things painful good and bad
Rest in peace thoughts and regrets If I think of you my eyes grow wet Misery as black as night Here lie losers from the fight
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